Based on the feedback I received, I learned that I must be more dynamic in appearance and take some time to draw insight into my target market and my company idea. For this third take, I developed my ideas more and made sure to put in the time to thinking more about what I wanted to say.
Hey Nick, nice job with your pitch. The explanation was pretty good, and the idea itself, as I’ve said before, sounds like it would be a hit. I still have one concern about your service, though. There are other services that already do something like this, Blue Apron being the most popular one, so consumers in your market might want to know why they should choose your service over so many others. Other than that, nice job! Love the blog re-design btw.
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